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Wizards of Words Newsletter June 2006 - 2nd Issue - 2nd Quarter
IN THIS ISSUE:
  • KANSAS CITY AND THE CONFERENCE
  • FROM THE PRESIDENT - Caryn Bruer
  • TOP TEN RULES - Pat Barnhart
  • FOR BETTER OR WIRTZ - Commentary by Mark Wirtz
  • FROM THE EDITOR - Rebecca Buckley
  • CURTAIN TIME - Jim (J.B.) Buckley
  • WIZARD SHORTS
  • HOW TO WRITE A QUERY - by Caryn Bruer
  • QUOTABLE QUOTES - Ina Goodling
  • WE HAVE NO CHOICE! - Barbara Watkins
  • BOOK OF THE MONTH

  • HALLELUJAH! IT'S ALL SET!

    Our 2nd Annual W.O.W. Writers' Conference is confirmed and scheduled and we're so excited we can hardly stand it! We are promising a stimulating event for all you writers and readers. This will be a wonderful opportunity to get to know one another and learn from each other.

    Whether it's a new marketing or promotional idea, discussion of characterization or plot, referrals to an agent or publisher or editor, your best storehouse of information is within other authors who may be a few steps ahead of you, behind you, or at the same level in writing careers.

    If you're a published author of any genre, this is the event for you. If you're an unpublished writer, this is the event for you. If you're just thinking about writing, this is the event for you. If you are a fan, friend, or family member of an author, this is the event for you.

    All members of the literary community are invited to join us at this celebratory and educational conference in October. Celebratory because it will be our first year as a non-profit organization formed "to assist in educating authors in every aspect of the literary field and promoting their books." That's what we're all about.

    So, if you want to write that memoir or novel or magazine article or poem or screenplay or stageplay and don't know where to begin or how to develop your ideas, come to this conference. If you want to learn how to market and promote your work, come to this conference. OR if you just want to come to Kansas City and have some fun and meet a dynamic group of authors, come to this conference.

    We urge you to join us Friday afternoon, October 13, through Saturday and Sunday, October 14 & 15 and support our organization and one another. We need you!

    In the meantime . . . lean back, put up your feet, and enjoy the articles in this quarter's Newsletter.

    Rebecca Buckley




    KANSAS CITY AND THE CONFERENCE
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    KANSAS CITY . . . a city of unmitigated American history and culture. A city well-worth the visit whether it's your first or fifth excursion, or more.

    When most people think of Kansas, they think of cattle ranches and cattle drives, stockyards, farms and rural living, and wagon trains. One thinks of the old days - gunslingers and lawlessness, Dodge City, Bat Masterson and Wyatt Earp, trading buffalo hides, and the Atchinson, Topeka & Santa Fe. They think of the song "Kansas City Here I Come" by Big Joe Turner.

    They think of the famous people born there, some of which are Hattie McDaniel, Charlie Parker, Gwendolyn Brooks (first African-American to win a Pulitzer Prize), Dwight D. Eisenhower, Walter Chrysler (know who he was?), Amelia Earhart, John Brown, Clyde Cessna and William Lear and Walter Beech - aviators, of course . . . AND . . . Kirstie Alley.

    But something you may not know, Kansas City and the arts are synonymous. Dance theatre, stage, opera, and numerous Internationally known museums and gallery districts with a multitude of shops and studios belonging to collectors and talented artists attract locals and visitors throughout the year. It's a city of fountains (bet you didn't know that).

    So, why not make this event a mini-vacation and bring your family along? There's plenty to keep them busy while you're attending the conference. For instance . . .

    . . . there's SCIENCE CITY, "where play and education go hand-in-hand. Let curiosity be your guide through more than 50 interactive areas, providing some real hands-on fun. Science City is located in Kansas City's Union Station."

    . . . there's the NATIONAL WORLD WAR I MUSEUM and the LIBERTY MEMORIAL TOWER. Walk through the grounds and exhibit halls and feel you're part of one of the most prideful eras of America history.

    . . . there's one of the best regional theatres in the country, the AMERICAN HEARTLAND THEATRE . . . "Now in our 19th season, AHT is recognized as one of Kansas City's theatrical cornerstones. Each year, our executive director, and our artistic director travel across the country to find the latest and most popular theatrical works on the American scene. Our success is due in large part to the attention we place on your entire evening of entertainment." (www.ahtkc.com)

    AND "Menopause the Musical" will be running at AHT while we're in Kansas City. So reserve a seat for Friday evening, October 13. After an afternoon group tour of the HALLMARK facilities that same day, and then an early casual dinner in the CROWN CENTER at a fun cafe called "A Streetcar named Desire", you can walk right over and enjoy the show. The theatre is in the Crown Center.

    These are just a few of the many attractions in Kansas City. And we're going to be right there in the middle of them at the:

    COMFORT INN AND SUITES - DOWNTOWN
    770 Admiral Blvd.
    KC, KS 64106
    816-472- 8808

    The hotel is in the Market District, off I-29 and I-35. Book your rooms early to ensure accommodations. And be sure to say you're with the Wizards of Words conference in order to receive the following negotiated rates.

    $67.99 per night - King or Double Queens
    $87.99 King or Double Queen suites

    You'll receive free continental breakfasts, free shuttle service to airport, and free local attraction shuttle when available. The Inn is located near many downtown sites including the Crown Center, and is minutes from the Riverboat Casinos.

    CONFERENCE REGISTRATION for non-members is $35
    SATURDAY AWARDS BANQUET for non-members is $25

    The workshops and schedule will be posted on the Wizards of Words website by June 30. Please check there for more information.

    Only 146 more days till we all meet and have some fun!

    Registration and Contest Forms are listed in the Links section at the bottom of this newsletter.

    Rebecca Buckley, CEO
    California


    FROM THE PRESIDENT - Caryn Bruer
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    “My, how time flies when you’re having fun!” I’ll steal that quote because it’s so true.

    I have been super busy so far this year, but have thoroughly enjoyed participating on the WOW message board. We have some really good writers in our midst, and it is exciting to read what they come up with in our word exercises. I’m really impressed with the excerpts that I’ve read from some of the books, too. Great imaginations, guys and gals!

    I recently visited Kansas City and selected the site for our 2006 Conference. There will be lots more information about that coming soon.

    We will have something for everyone, and you will certainly not want to miss out on attending the event.

    I am going to tease you with a few hints at just some of what our conference will have in store this year: First, it will be in the middle of the country, and we hope to have all of our members present. Kansas City is a beautiful place to visit, with lots to offer. Visit the homepage on the Internet and browse to discover some of the things you’ll want to be sure to see while you’re there. Our workshops will include writing and marketing techniques and some social events that will allow the members of this group to meet and mingle with the folks you’ve met online. And we’re going to set up a temporary “bookstore” to sell our members' work.

    Our conference will begin with early registration on Friday afternoon for the early birds. Our CEO, Rebecca Buckley, has planned and will be leading the afternoon and early evening activities on Friday for those who would like to participate.

    Then on Saturday we'll continue with registration for those arriving that morning, followed by a full day of workshops, with an awards banquet that evening and a fabulous keynote speaker.

    On Sunday morning our annual business meeting will take place and after lunch our selected panel of authors will be available for open discussion.

    The first six months of Wizards of Words has been wonderful. We’ve come over a few bumps in the road, and I’m sure there will be more along the way. We’ve lost a beloved member to an untimely death, and will miss Dazz’s wit and charm. And we’ve gained new members. I’m sure that growth will continue.

    Several of our Wizards have recently joined the ranks of published authors and are proudly presenting their work to the public. Others have now published second or even third books. We’ve had members become part of the electronically published Amazon Shorts with online sales. Quite a number of our members have participated in group book signings in several states. We’re proud to say we've had some contest winners.

    Editors and contributors from other online websites with essential tools for writers are frequent visitors to our message board, and have shared their wisdom and insight with us from time to time. If anyone ever doubted that Wizards of Words could be a viable tool for writers, all they need do is click the link to the WOW CAFE CHAT CLUB messageboard on our homepage, and with a cup of coffee in hand, settle in to do some serious reading through the forums. (I print out things that I use for reference all the time.) We do good stuff, folks!

    I hope that every single one of you, including many of our message board contributors, are making plans to join us in Kansas City on October 13 - 15. It promises to be an interesting conference with an opportunity for you to learn something new and to share what you know with others. And we also promise lots of smiles and hugs and friendship that will last you a lifetime!

    Caryn Bruer (aka Anne Elwick)
    Arkansas


    TOP TEN RULES - Pat Barnhart
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    (Pat Barnhart lives in Florida and is not only a published author, she is an editor. Her business is WRITING DOWN PAT: making you look good, one word at a time. She's also a ghost writer and will write proposals and business jingles for your company. She writes marketing copy, web site content, press releases, resumes . . . and the list goes on and on. We're very proud to have her as a member of our writers' organization.)

    PAT SAYS . . .

    At the risk of making my services irrelevant, I would like to offer the following Top Ten Rules that have been developed over time. A compilation of self-observed faults with manuscripts, and tips that have been gleaned from a variety of sources.

    I hope you will enjoy them, take them to heart, and put them into practice. You may just get your writing down pat, without Writing Down Pat!

    1. Read it out loud. Sounds simple, but you’ll be amazed at the errors your ears will hear that your eyes couldn’t see. This works especially well for testing the ‘truth’ of dialogue.

    2. Use the spelling and grammar check tool that comes with your word processing program. It’s quick, easy, cheap, and will catch all those hyphenated words you invented. What it doesn’t work for are homonyms and synonyms. Don’t rely too heavily on spell check, but do pay attention to those perceived errors that show up with red underlining.

    3. Shorten your paragraphs. Nothing makes a reader skip over your pages faster than a huge chunk of sheer exposition, description, or anything other than dialogue. Don’t you do that when you're reading? Skip to the ‘good parts’ where action is happening or people are talking?

    4. Speaking of people talking, make sure the dialogue has a purpose. It must move the story forward. No one likes to just read ‘chit chat’.

    5. Be careful about using the same words, phrasing or expressions repeatedly. (See number 1.)

    6. Plot your novel carefully, using a chapter or an outline format. You might even want to write your ending first, and then work toward it.

    7. Don’t ‘date’ your novel by using a lot of current expressions, pop culture references, or news items. It will date your book faster than a crack ‘ho.

    8. Put your reader ‘in the story’. Put me there. Tell me what the weather’s like, what the scenery looks like, what dinner smells are coming from the kitchen. We don’t just read with our eyes, we enjoy using all of our senses. The more we use, the more engaged we become with what we’re reading, and the faster we turn those pages.

    9. Don’t forget humor, if it’s appropriate, but remember that a little bit goes a long way.

    And Finally,

    10. Your protagonist (your main character, folks, not someone who professionally labels clothes) must grow or change by the end of the novel. He or she must somehow be different as a result of the experiences in the story. Think of your story as a journey – we are never the same at the end of a journey. If we are, it wasn’t much of a journey.

    Now, go write something great!

    FOR BETTER OR WIRTZ - Commentary by Mark Wirtz



    Many, many, years ago, when I first started to work as a studio composer/arranger/conductor, I made a most extraordinary discovery. Much like an author's paper-rendered words in one- dimensional, lifeless symbols that merely serve as triggers in the beholder's mind to convert them into subjective interpretations and sensual experiences . . . the music notes that a composer or orchestrator puts to paper are equally hollow symbols, dependent upon and hostage to the reader's subjective, sensual, interpretation.

    What astounded me was the nigh miracle that, somehow, my utterly personal and private visions and emotional impulses packaged in abstract, unemotional symbols, nevertheless managed to survive the purely technical journey not only into the interpreting ambassador's mind and subsequent performance (i.e. a musician), but actually arrived in the eventual audience's perception vividly intact, alive, and uncorrupted -- like sensory mirrors of my original vision; as if I had directly blue-toothed that vision from my mind to theirs. Bloody amazing! There is no logical or scientific explanation for this phenomenon in communication, merely proving the existence of metaphysical energies that travel along with even the most benign message, the latter of which, in and by itself, serves merely as a cryptic conduit and vessel.

    What astonished me further, almost in contradiction to the above, was the discovery that a soloist's rendition of a creator's messengered vision alters its essence to one that is critically colored by the soloist's personal chemistry. As such, ten singers singing the same song will result in ten virtually different "creations" and experiences. It appears that when the ultimate instrument is no longer an inanimate one, it is the human performer him/herself. That performer becomes the crucial instrument whose unique soul, character and chemistry override the dimensions of the original creator's vision and morph it into an altered energy, which either radiates and captivates, or renders the creation bland and meaningless. As such, it is the singer, not the song, that ultimately matters the most -- regardless of its author.

    In recent years, since I started to write and perform comedy, I have found this to be even more conclusively true -- ten comedians can tell the same joke (regardless of who wrote it), yet the audience will experience ten entirely different jokes. One joke likely to be as boring and unfunny as another might be hilarious and side-splitting -- same joke to begin with.

    What does any of that have to do with writing? Everything.

    Ten authors can use the same premise, the same words, even the same title, and yet -- there will be ten different results. It's all about not WHAT is written, but WHO writes or says it, and HOW. It's the tone that makes the music.

    So, every time you look at a best-seller and believe it to be "not very good," or "not as well written" as yours, you're looking in the wrong place. You got waylaid by your vanity.

    You see, dear fellow authors, as the adage goes, it's not the wand that matters, but the magic. Even a poorly written book ("The Color Purple" was a mess, but it was magical) may seduce millions of readers into embracing it, while high literary works of art may languish and be doomed to obscurity. Why do you think not every language professor has a bestseller out there, or may not even have a book published at all? Most don't!

    Bottom line -- just showing up is not enough, folks, regardless of how well dressed we are. And when anybody, notably an editor or agent, sees and possibly "touches" our new manuscript -- it's a blind date. We have about twenty seconds to make that proverbial first impression for which we never get a second chance for OUR metaphysical energy (call it soul) to radiate and OUR chemistry to sparkle and click -- or not. And when it does, it is not a miracle to which we are fortunate victims, it's magic -- for which we are utterly responsible by the way we live, think, act, choose, and feel and by who and what WE are and reveal (!), not what our book is. Because the book is nothing but a bunch of paper filled with cold, heartless, symbols, or cybers and digits.

    I am including my memorial tribute words to Dazzling Dave in this writing at this point, because I don't feel like adding a lot of pretty words, kudos, and gestures of admiration to those that have already been wonderfully expressed by so many of you in other places.

    All I have to say is that Dave had the magic of which I spoke; that extraordinary sparkle, sensitivity, humor and omnipotent love, which irresistibly charmed, disarmed, and seduced everybody with whom he connected. Dave made a difference.

    Dave and I spent many, many hours in conversation - philosophical... intellectual... surrealistic... idiotic... brutally down to earth... comical... sophomoric and shamelessly profane, relishing even disgusting gross-outs with child-like glee.

    Dave and I never met in person. And yet, I mourn his death more than I have ever mourned the death of any other friend. And yes, even he and I would get tired of each other's shit, but we never shut up, and we never will. Our conversations continue, even if only in the magical garden of our spirits.

    C ya, Dave. I love you.

    Mark Wirtz (aka Michael Sinclair
    Georgia


    FROM THE EDITOR - Rebecca Buckley
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    SHAKESPEARE

    Just the sound of that name or seeing it on the written page would shoot doom and dread through my veins in English Lit classes. I didn’t understand his pieces, didn’t like them, and most times didn’t read them when they were assigned. I would pray I wouldn’t be asked a question about his “Comedy of Errors” or “Richard the Third” or “Merchant of Venice” and so on. I’m surprised my teachers didn’t notice me slinking down in my chair during the Shakespeare sessions. Or did they? Regardless, I managed to slide by with average grades that I accepted graciously on the way out the door.

    All through my life when asked if I was familiar with this or that of his writings, or asked if I’d like to go to a Shakespearean play, I’d shrug my shoulders or say no, and would change the subject, never to return to it. I’d even visited The Globe Theatre in Stratford upon Avon and still felt an aversion to him, but loved his town in England.

    So, what is it about this man, this writer of the Elizabethan Age, considered the greatest dramatist the world has ever known and the finest poet who has written in the English language, who leaves me cold and at the same time makes me feel so stupid and unlearned? What is it about his work that has captivated so many for so long? My god, the poems and plays he wrote are stamped indelibly in the history of literature and stage. Movies have been made about him, as well as his work. Give me a break! Quit hounding me, Bill!

    And what about James Joyce and his “Ulysses”? Have any of you read “Ulysses”? Have you read any of Joyce? For some reason I’m drawn to this controversial Irish author of the 20th Century, although I'm angry with him for making his wife Nora wait 20 years to marry him. He didn't marry her till he was nearing death. Nice guy. They lived together and had children, but no marriage. Living in "sin" was unheard of in those days. So they moved to France where it was more acceptable. Okay, Rebecca, back to the man and his writing . . . yes . . . I’ve read his “Dubliners”, which is terrific. “Finnegans Wake” was his, you know. So, why is it I get James Joyce and for the life of me, I don’t get Shakespeare? It’s got to be a brain block.

    Thomas Hardy. He’s not an easy one to read. Especially his “Far From the Madding Crowd” (I used to call it the "maddening" crowd, until someone with the initials J.B. let me in on the truth). Hardy drones on and on in that book, doesn't he? I loved the British television mini-series of it. And don’t take me wrong, I do enjoy his writing, I just have to be able to concentrate solely on it when I read. No distractions, whatsoever. I've even visited his beloved Dorset. Do you know that he had an unpublished novel “The Poor Man and the Lady”? It was his first novel. Wouldn’t you love to get your hands on that manuscript? Next he wrote “The Mayor of Casterbridge”, “The Woodlanders” (which I just purchased in Cornwall, but haven’t read), “Tess of the D’Urbervilles”, ‘The Pursuit of the Well-Beloved”, and “Jude the Obscure.” That was it for novels. Over the next 30 years he published 900 poems and his epic drama in verse, “The Dynasts.”

    So, why am I so interested in Thomas Hardy and James Joyce and not William Shakespeare? Oh, almost forgot. I totally get Fyodor Dostoyevski. Have read his “Crime and Punishment” and other works, and I love it all. Go figure.

    All four of these authors are complex reads. The authors, themselves, were complex. Their lives were complex. And if I can understand Joyce, Hardy, and Dostoyevski, I should be able to understand good ol’ B.S., I mean, W.S.

    In fact, I just happen to have a volume of his complete works and it includes the story of the times and life of Shakespeare. Maybe it will help me get to know him. I seem to enjoy a writer's work more when I know something about him, aside from his writing. And maybe some of his words and techniques will rub off on me. Yep, methinks it’s about time I get to know Mr. Shakespeare. (Hey, he’s rubbing off on me already.) And just maybe through him I’ll learn to understand poetry well enough to write it. I’ve learned from the other three gentlemen.

    Regardless, and for whatever reason, of late I’m being drawn to this man that I have always abhorred, steered clear of, shunned and ignored. But then isn’t that the way a good romance can begin?

    Rebecca Buckley
    California

    CURTAIN TIME - Jim (J.B.) Buckley



    MOVIES WITH A NOVEL APPROACH

    Do W.O.W.s usually/ever/never entertain, during the creative process, the hovering possibility that those divinely easy-flowing, painstaking paragraphs might just possibly be Oscar- bound? If Dan Brown did – and it’s more than likely he did - after all, the movie is there in your head as you read: vivid, wide-screen, clear as a bell.

    So what happened? His DaVinci turned out to be disappointing to the critical press; sounds like it shoulda stood between its book covers. The incessant global shenanigans that the movie ignited may have been a bore, but fellow authors are to be very proud of Dan Brown just the same. Imagine him being on the set along with Akira Goldman, the guy who adapted Brown’s inevitably controversial opus to the screen, as well as Ron Howard, the director. If he saw anything being filmed which he considered unfair to his imaginative bestseller, he was too bashful to complain or, if he did complain, he was probably charmed by Ron and/or Akira into waiting for the editors to further screw it up.

    The New Yorker critic, Anthony Lane, confesses (issue of 5/9/06), “I have never managed to crawl past page 100. As I sat down to watch "The DaVinci Code" I therefore was in the lonely, if enviable position of not actually knowing what happened.” And then he gets coy, “As far as I am qualified to judge, the film remains unswervingly loyal to the book and so I welcome this fidelity because it allows us to propose a syllogism: the movie is baloney, the movie is an accurate representation of the book, therefore the book is also baloney.”

    An amusing critique, but if it is baloney, it is thought- provoking, entertaining baloney, especially in causing heads of state and religions to erupt with wrath and boycotts. Although the Pope, whose religion is not notably glamorized, seems to be taking it all as refreshing publicity after the embarrassments that are popping up so frequently. One is the naïve suggestion that Jesus and Mary had a child. And some eager innocents grabbed as proof that all we humans, of all colors, talents and sins must surely be descendants of the Christ Family. That is something to boggle the mind!

    It is surprising that the current Hollywood habit didn’t require this brainy thriller be slightly porno’d with the obligatory shot of brazen sexual intercourse. Does the author dare to suggest in his final passage a teasing romance between the leads – with a sequel in mind? Well, hell! They’re in Paris, man! They could at least have Lunch at the Louvre, if not Love at the Louvre! (No plug intended, R.B.)

    It’s still a thrilling read, if not a thrilling film, with a lovely final scene, to which our boys have added a brilliant touch (a la Ernst Lubitsch). Tatou is taking leave of Tom, she stops at a reflecting pool, glances back to make sure he’s watching, and places her foot to test the water. Why? To see if she can walk on it of course. She shakes her head ever so slightly with a disappointed smile and walks off into the sunset. But it makes sense. If you are a blood relation, you should be able to, right?

    A fantastic gimmick will get a producer’s attention despite the quality of the writing being somewhat less than Dan Brownish. His DaVinci tome’s success may have inspired the just-published “Crows over the Wheatfield” by Adam Braver. It, too, attempts to solve a secret. This one is about the final days of Van Gogh. However, Merle Rubin’s review in the L.A. Times (6/13/06) will probably have no influence on there being a movie version.

    Rubins says, “Foggy thinking here seems to go hand in hand with bad writing. It’s been a long time since I’ve encountered a book as poorly written as this. We’re not talking here about bad writing in the sense of purple prose or over-the- top experimental pyrotechnics, or the kind of clichéd, slick yet serviceable prose that moves you along from one page to the next of the latest potboiler. This, on the contrary, is bad writing you trip and stumble over. Writing you don’t expect from any professional writer like Braver, who teaches creative writing and whose books have enjoyed some critical success. This is prose you’d downgrade on a freshman composition paper: awkward, imprecise, flaccid and tin-eared, riddled with faulty diction, misused prepositions, dangling participles and mangled verb tenses.”

    I’ll wait for the movie.

    Jim Buckley
    California


    WIZARD SHORTS



    This will be a continuous offering, so all of you talented Wizards are encouraged to submit your real-life short stories and commentaries for our upcoming quarterly issues to be published in SEPTEMBER and DECEMBER.

    In this issue we have the following contributions by four of our authors for your reading enjoyment. You may print them and read at your leisure.

    HEMINGWAY, NO WAY
    By Larry L Evans
    Michigan


    DINNER WITH DAISY
    (An excerpt from “The Last of the South Town Rinky Dinks”)
    By E. Don Harpe
    Florida


    ELVIS, UPSTAGED
    By Caryn Bruer
    Arkansas


    INDEPENDENCE DAY
    By Pat Barnhart
    Florida


    HOW TO WRITE A QUERY - by Caryn Bruer



    Write what you Know:
    The first step to writing a terrific query letter is to know what it is that you're writing. Are you writing fiction or nonfiction? If you're writing fiction: what genre and/or sub genre (historical romance; cozy mystery; epic fantasy, etc.).

    How long is your manuscript?
    If you are writing fiction, you have probably finished the manuscript and you're now looking for an agent (or editor), so you know the approximate length (word count) of your material. You should have checked the industry standards of various genres. Cozy mysteries, for example, are between 60,000-85,000 words; thrillers are closer to 100,000 words; contemporary romances (not category) are 95,000-100,000; fantasy novels are 90,000-140,000.

    Complete or Not Complete, That is the Question:
    Have you finished your manuscript? Most agents/editors only want to see material if it has been completed. There are some instances in which this is not the case, but it's generally accepted that you should only query if your material is complete.

    What I like about You:
    Now is the time to wow us with your fantastic credentials. Have you published with major publishers in 10 languages and sold over 10 million copies? That's what we want to know! Okay, maybe you haven't had such luck. However, have you sold at all? Won any contests? Earned your MFA in Creative Writing? Studied with a major author? Member of any professional organizations (RWA, MWA, Sisters in Crime, etc.)

    Name, Date and Serial Number, please:
    Okay, maybe we don't need your serial number, but please, PLEASE be sure to give us your details. We need your name, address, phone number and email address. Also, please don't forget to date your letter. If your material has been in our office for a while, we need to know, so we look to the date on the cover letter.

    Comparisons:
    Like or As. Similes. A helpful tool is to compare your work to others of a similar nature. Of course, I'm sure yours is much better, but still, humor that NY Times Best-selling author and compare his/her book to yours.

    What's it about?
    Don't let the agent/editor guess the storyline. Put it down in a couple of sentences. This should be one short paragraph that summarizes the whole book. You should be able to boil your story down to just a few lines. However, with those few lines you need to capture the agent/editor's attention. So, make sure you mention what makes this story SPECIAL.

    Let it Flow, Let it Flow, Let it Flow:
    Now you need to combine all of these elements together into a cohesive, coherent one-page pitch. Pay attention to spelling and grammar. Make sure the letter "reads" well and doesn't sound disjointed and fragmented. This is where the agent/author will be checking out your writing style.

    3-2-1 Contact:
    Don't forget a SASE. If you live overseas, you can be forgiven the SASE and we will email you. But don't make it hard for us to contact you—include the SASE.

    Caryn Bruer
    Arkansas



    QUOTABLE QUOTES - Ina Goodling
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    "My heart took delight in my work and this was the reward for all my labor."
    Ecclesiastes 2:10

    "Now faith is being sure of what we hope for and certain of what we do not see."
    Hebrews 11:1

    "Everything is possible for him who believes."
    Mark 9:23

    "A friend loves at all times."
    Proverbs 17:17

    "He has made everything beautiful in its time."
    Ecclesiastes 3:11

    "Pleasant words are a honeycomb, sweet to the soul and healing to the bones."
    Proverbs 16:24

    "Every moment Nature starts on the longest journey, and every moment she reaches her goal."
    Goethe

    "Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever."
    Mahatma Gandhi

    "Imagination is more important than knowledge."
    Albert Einstein

    "The salvation of mankind lies in the hands of the creatively maladjusted."
    Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr.

    "All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream."
    Edgar Allan Poe

    "We cannot do great things. We can only do little things with great love."
    Mother Teresa

    "Two roads diverged in a wood; and I, I took the one less traveled, And that has made all the difference."
    Robert Frost

    "Man has his will, but woman has her way."
    Oliver Wendell Holmes

    "Love doesn’t make the world go round. Love is what makes the ride worthwhile."
    Franklin P. Jones

    "You give little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give."
    Kahlil Gibran

    "Words are like leaves, and where they most abound, Much fruit of sense beneath is rarely found."
    Alexander Pope

    "Be silent — or say something better than silence."
    Proverb

    "Attempt the impossible in order to improve your work."
    Bette Davis

    "Things don’t change. You change. Your way of looking, that’s all."
    Carlos Castaneda

    There are only two lasting bequests we can hope to give our children. One is roots, the other, wings.
    Hodding Carter

    The very substance of the ambitious is merely the shadow of a dream.
    - William Shakespeare

    "The purpose of a life is a life of purpose."
    Robert Byrn

    Ina resides in California.

    WE HAVE NO CHOICE! - Barbara Watkins
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    Numerous sleepless nights and countless characters evolving filling a mind with images of far away places are only a few characteristics of a writer. The love of storytelling and being able to share one's unique ability and style is the ultimate dream. No amount of rejection letters from an editor or publisher can break the spirit of an aspiring writer.

    This want and need to communicate our thoughts and fantasies in our writing, so that others can dream through our eyes, is sometimes overwhelming.

    But we'll keep dreaming and conjuring up images. We’ll keep inventing mystical places and thought- provoking stories. You see, it's not our job, it's our responsibility to us to express our God-given ability and share with others.

    Barbara Watkins
    Missouri


    BOOK OF THE MONTH



    In this issue are the books chosen to rule as Book of the Month for the months of March, April, and May. A panel of peers read and rated the three books that were randomly drawn for that particular month and the best of the three was selected.

    Our panel of three authors serves for a three-month term. (Appears to be all about three, doesn't it?)

    If you would like to be considered for an upcoming panel term, please let us know. The books will be sent to you in either PDF, RTF, WORD, or hardcopy.

    MARCH




    Click on the bookcover to see a larger view and read more about our Charter Member - EDD VOSS - and his "A Tree for America". Edd lives in Washington and also writes short stories and some of those are in the Amazon.com Shorts program. He's a down-to-earth, fabulous writer and you will definitely want to read much more of his work.

    CONGRATULATIONS, EDD!



    Higgins

    Jeffery S. Miller

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    We had two winners in March. Another good writer, with shades of Damon Runyon in his work, JEFFERY S. MILLER, a Nevada resident, is someone to watch for on the up-an'-comin' lists. You can bet there's more "Higgins" adventures on the horizon, and you'll want to read and collect them all.

    CONGRATULATIONS, JEFFERY!

    APRIL




    CLAUDETTE MILNER lives in North Carolina and has written a gripping book - "Children of Plains Estates" - for young people and it already is a helping tool in schools and homes with the multitude of emotional struggles our youth are experiencing today. This is a must read, regardless of age. She's shopping the second book of the series as we speak.

    CONGRATULATIONS, CLAUDETTE!





    Two winners again this month! CHERYL HILL shares this month's stage with her first murder mystery - "Family Tradition". She lives in Nevada and has also published a second novel - "Reverse Time" - about a female correctional officer's first year at a detention facility. We expect to see a lot from this very talented writer.

    CONGRATULATIONS, CHERYL!

    MAY


    IN LOVING MEMORY OF A FELLOW AUTHOR

    T.O.Y.S. : Tired of Your S*#@%!
    by J. David Jamesson

    A FABULOUS READ! He tells it like it is!


    The following was in
    The Las Vegas Nevada Review.
    Published February 16, 2006

    BURRESS, J. (aka J. David Jamesson)
    J. David Burress, 50, of Henderson, died Feb. 8, 2006. He is survived by his wife, Deborah S.; sons, Jeremy and Shawn; daughters, Krystal and Shasta, all of Henderson.

    HIS SPIRIT AND HIS BOOK LIVE ON!

    CONGRATULATIONS, DAVE!


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    Editor/Production: Rebecca Buckley
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    CONTRIBUTING WRITERS THIS ISSUE:
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